Excerpt from first chapter of my book 'First Light.' Is it good?

Wow--this is awesome! I'd love to read more of it! As soon as you get the second chapter done, email it to me!! I love being able to read other people's work, being a writer myself. It'a very well-written, and lots of people can relate to the characters--The sarcastic, quiet, and seemingly sensitive girl who grew up without a father, the energetic best friend that helps her be happy, the stuck-up rich girl snob that everyone hates but hangs out with anyway, the nerdy-ish guy friend hopelessly in love with the lead, and they ex bf you have a slight problem with, cause he's dating the girl you hate. I personally relate to the lead :) But like I said when you get more done, I would love to hear it, so email it to me!